Rehearsal notes

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Developing in rehearsal with the following cast:

Writer / Director – Scott Shannon

Notes – Mar 9/2019-present

Wow! Month and a half or so has passed since my last post noting our first meet about JONES. It’s been a slow burning process thus far, which is also why I wanted to begin the journey so early, knowing the weather and illness would plague some of our time together. Nonetheless, we have essentially worked the first half of the play, with some sections seeing more attention than others thus far but at least every moment/scene in that first half has had its initial chance to breathe.

This first half or more of the play runs on a lot of solo sections, larger passages of text shared between the actor and the audience. Initially, in a very early form of the text, the play was really just three large monologues, which was interesting to me but within developing some of that it became apparent I needed interaction and more of a plot to drive this which in turn had major repercussions on the text/story itself … and well, here we are 5 years later with what appears to be the final incarnation of A STORY JONES … on that note …

This past Xmas season (2018) I took the middle of the JONES script and deleted it, about 5-6 pages – it just did NOT work for me any longer. However, there was something in those 5-6 pages that led me down the route to building the ending of the play which I do in fact still dig. Writing is weird. My old notion of this playwrighting thing was that I had to write something out, how it came out, in the order the words came and trust that this was as it should be – no wonder it never felt good afterwards. Now, I do not follow any “rules” or methods, but rather just whatever works – the same as I do in the rehearsal room: no one true way to rehearse or write a play, but rather whatever yields the desired results for a given project will in fact be the “best” method.

Andrew Jones as ‘Ben’ in The Dumb Waiter

And so, I lifted out the middle of the play and have spent the past 2 months rebuilding something that takes us from the play’s first half to the 2nd half which I was happy with, replacing those 5-6 pages in the middles with other text, ideas, twists, etc. It has been a bit anxiety inducing since we are in rehearsal for the play already, I’ve booked venue space, announced production dates, etc. However, I now feel MUCHOS better about the middle of the play than I did and that was the aim of the past 2 months – I think this works much more nicely and created some very cool moments, which then also impact the 2nd half of the play (and a few moments in the first half), but that was expected and is in its final smoothing out this weekend.

This TUESDAY I will bring the full text to the cast and we’ll read the full piece altogether for the first time – should shed some light on some puzzling stuff in the first half for them, while also creating another layer of questions and uncertainty. FUN STUFF!

And so, the play overall does certainly rely on strong solo moments from each actor in a very close proximity with the audience – Annick and Michael are more than up to the task. I’ve now spent time with each of them on their respective character’s speeches in the first half of the show, but due to scheduling I have spent more time with Annick and this past week saw us working up her opening sections VERY nicely. There was lots of exploration, I felt, and Annick was a very giving and open performer to try what I was throwing at her. It is sooooo good when a work and the actors are open to exploration and discovery, and this play was written with hopes that could happen (more below) and with this being my first time directing Annick it was great to experience her willingness in the room to just try something even if she wasn’t sure why – sometimes I’m not sure *why* as the director, but if it elicits what we need for a moment than the exercise was a success. Michael is VERY good like this in the room as well, game to try anything to find what works for a moment.

The way I *tried* to write was so that the “character” of each role would really be determined by the actor inhabiting the role, what they could bring, and their interpretation of the writing. Certainly, this is the case for *any* work, but some are more rigid than others of course, and yet I hope JONES is allowing the actors room to move – I know as the director I am not feeling locked down by the text. Interestingly, I am finding that directing this is like directing a work written by somebody else. I find myself needing to decipher what certain lines are getting at, how a scene should build, or how the character should be reacting, etc. and this feels just like it does when I direct something else – I really do float on a vision until it starts to solidify during the process. At the beginning I can see something in the distance, a form or feeling we want, but I’m not sure how to get there or what exactly it will be when we reach it … but *IT* is out there and it’s the excursion towards it that keeps me interested in this theatrical game time and time again …

Looking forward to the rehearsal room this week! Things are stepping up, lines are sticking in heads, and momentum is gathering … wicked good feeling.


CAVEAT: My good feelings about the changes to the middle of the text and the text overall may not be reflected in an audience’s reaction, but that’s a different story/hurdle/moment.

Notes – Jan 7-19/2019

So happy to welcome back a Shadow who was truly in the shadows to make “the dumb waiter” come alive for us a couple of times, but now we’ll be exploiting her talents ON STAGE for our spring debut of A STORY JONES — thanks for playing with us, Annick, and I look forward to our time together in the rehearsal room.

A STORY JONES cast 2019: Scott Shannon + Annick Blizzard + Michael Holmes-Lauder

A STORY JONES cast 2019:
Scott Shannon + Annick Blizzard
+ Michael Holmes-Lauder


Notes – Sept/2018

It’s become painfully apparent we do NOT have the time in the next 60 days to bring this play to life the way it should, so we are quickly switching performance gears towards something that can celebrate our 20 years of NASTY theatre in the SHADOWS but also provide a fun exploratory adventure for us. A STORY JONES will be worked over late fall and the winter which will give it the time the script will need with the way our schedules work … and that’s cool, it will still be part of our 20th year and great way to pay to celebrate Andrew. We’ll aim for late April/early May, I think. I underestimated the time we’ll need playing with the text, and I REALLY hate to rush something like that if I don’t have to … and we don’t … so we won’t, and the play will be the better experience for that extra time, for both us and the people we share it with …


Notes – June 4/2018

Stage layout for A STORY JONES

Stage layout for A STORY JONES

And so, the performance cast has been picked and we had our first read together last night. More details to come, but Liz and Michael take me back to the original group we worked with, minus one. The story has become a 3-character affair rather than 4 … the read last night sent me home with edits, revisions, and further work to do in flushing out the journey of the story … happy with the beginning and where the end takes us, but need to smooth out the space between in some fashion … it’s lacking …

I am stoked to finally bring this story to a live stage … 5 years in the making, and counting … but I’m happy we’ve taken our time to play … didn’t want to rush the creation of this tribute to our Shadow brother


Notes – Dec 9/2017

First COMPLETE draft FINISHED! That said, there is still much to refine and work through, but these past couple of weeks found me discovering moments and confidently making decisions about where the text was headed when options presented themselves – this has been my biggest obstacle, I think. I find it hard to make a firm choice at times because I hate to close off avenues a character/idea/action might explore which can be fun in its own way, but this results in quite a messy text that isn’t much use beyond the games I can play with it home seated at my desk. I now feel we have a complete story, with a beginning, middle and end. Up until now it’s been a haphazard grouping of moments, shifting and ever changing. A STORY JONES now exists as a complete play, and it feels good to have reached this point.

It’s been a lengthy process, and this play has gone through a number of different forms and varying storylines while still maintaining the nugget with which I began: A character named JONES who is unable to eat meaning he is unable to celebrate life. While the lack of eating took a bit of a backseat to the idea of stories, it’s still essential to who JONES is and what happens. Stories are a big part of my memory of Andrew Jones, him telling stories, stories about his own life both recent and historic; or about the world, cultural, political, etc.; or sometimes rambling on and losing me, but getting so excited in what he was sharing. He loved telling stories, which is also partly why I think he loved being on stage. This play is not an autobiographical tale of Andrew, but rather stems from a recent memory of him in his final year or so and taking that and turning it into something dramatic, in a world of play. The story of this show moved far away from Andrew as a person, while always having his spirit echoing through the text and certain things about him incorporated into the life of the character JONES and what he shares. But this is not the story of Andrew, which became more apparent as I tried holding onto JONES being the hero of this play – he’s not, and never could be with the way the story began. CHAEL is the hero, for better or worse, and JONES is subject to his journey, as much as he struggles against that.

A Story Jones cast: Michael + Matthew + Scott

I could not have developed this play, the story as it stands now, without Matt and Michael subjecting themselves to my whims and flights of fancy over the past couple of years. Changing directions with the text (more than once), stalling for time while I stared blankly at the page for weeks hoping for progress to bring into the rehearsal room, vague about who or what these “characters” even are, and always assuming their patience – THANK YOU BOTH IMMENSELY, my Shadow brothers.

While those two are busy with life and new life, we’ll be putting A STORY JONES to the side for the immediate future. When Matt and Michael are ready, we’ll be working this up towards a production run which will be an exciting fulfilment of this project. But that needs to be on hold for the time being, so I’m switching gears back to further development of the one-man show I’ve been working on, MAKE THAT NOISE! My hope is the coming year finds this solo piece solidifying more completely …


Notes – November 2016

Part of my brain has been occupied with performing, studying lines, producing our current show, but this has kept a theatrical vibe running through me in a good way so I’ve been finding myself getting some good solid time writing during the later parts of the evenings over the fall. The story has taken some unexpected turns with odd developments … we’ll see how this reads when we can come up for air from IN ON IT. I’m particularly pleased with some refinements I’ve made to the opening scene and think I do like the weird places these characters have taken me …


Notes – August 2016

We met to read through a different script, had problems getting my 10-year-old laptop to play well with the PDF files, and so I took the opportunity to get the guys to read through some of my changes to A STORY JONES. We read from the top of the show, which has nothing for me to “speak” as JONES (you’ll see at some point, when we finally stage this), but I had made some nuanced changes for VIC in the opening pages, and then I believe it was fairly different and I had a few more pages of fairly solid text than I’d had when we broke earlier in the summer. It was cool to have stepped away from the text with these guys for a bit, and then to hear it in their voices again — a very telling experience, and I was pleasantly surprised to hear I liked what I heard.

The plan for the fall is to stage a known work, so we’re just ironing out those details now, but I continue to play with this script and we’ll continue to play with it as a group periodically over the fall. I hope to stage at least a workshop version of the play later in the fall for a small audience … should be good to see if we’re onto something that works beyond our perspectives in the room.


Notes – March-June 2016

This doesn’t get any easier, even though the show isn’t necessarily *about* you in as much as it’s an attempt to *celebrate* you, but we miss ya in the rehearsal room, Andrew

Writing, for me, is not an easy task. It’s not. But I want to finish this work, and others, so I persist … but it’s slow going. It’s very helpful and easy going to have both Matt and Michael in the room — Matt has joined our process for this project with Nasty Shadows narrowing down to the three of us for some focused work over the next while, and what I hope will extend indefinitely. It really is good to share the rehearsal space with these guys — I’m very lucky they’ve agreed to play with my texts. It helps me write. Of course, I wouldn’t have gotten this far without the earlier involvement of Elizabeth, Julie , and Crystal — many, many thanks to your time and playfulness. The play has taken a different turn without women characters, not that I feel I’m writing gender specific roles — I’m purposely trying not to do that — but I also can’t help but by influenced by the presence of the actors involved. In some sense I have more confidence in my word choice and phrasings not writing for women, but I am also trying to write so “VIC” could easily become “VIV” if I so desired.

A Story Jones rehearsal - Matthew Spinney & Michael Holmes-Lauder

A Story Jones rehearsal – Matthew Spinney & Michael Holmes-Lauder

That said, we didn’t get as far along in the process as I’d hoped by our summer break, but that gives me time to go away and go further with the writing. There were some considerable logistical hurdles to overcome in addition to developing the story. The acting compliment is now reduced from 4 to 3, so does this idea still work? Is there still a story there? I think there is … I took two roles and kind of combined them into a single character containing ranges of space, and I think it will work in a very cool way. Things focused down for me when we reduced the characters to only three, and I’m only now seeing that more clearly.

I look forward to this next leg of writing … see where this goes … I want to use more song … we have a couple in the mix already, but I think more will feel right …


Notes – May 30/2015(PM)

Crystal Chettiar, Elizabeth Goodyear & Michael Holmes-Lauder rehearsing  A Story Jones

Crystal Chettiar, Elizabeth Goodyear & Michael Holmes-Lauder rehearsing A Story Jones

This photo shows the layout of the basic playing space — there’s a body missing from the photograph. Since I am playing ‘Jones’, who for the most part is laying in bed, I stood outside the playing space to direct the actors in action (the 3 chairs are the bed where ‘Jones’ would lay). Crystal in the role of ‘Liv’ is at a wash basin rinsing a cloth, while Elizabeth, ‘Viv’, pats her damp cloth against the head of ‘Jones’, and Michael as ‘Chael’ describes his arrival in this storytelling space. The audience would be in a tighter horseshoe shape around the players, circling behind Michael’s position.

During our times together we spent a good deal of time working this shape and some choreographed actions performed by the woman as they “care” for ‘Jones’, but we didn’t spend as much time together as I’d originally hoped — writing was hard. Good but hard. As such we did not get to a position where I wanted to share anything with folks outside our process. But getting together with the actors the few times I did helped me immensely — it’s the work in the rehearsal room that sparks different avenues for me, and I thoroughly enjoy taking those ideas and running away to sit alone with them and see what can happen.

Hoping 2016 sees us able to stage a full Nasty production of this show, to honour our old friend


A STORY JONES Notes – April 23/2015(PM)
It’s been a couple of weeks since we last met in the rehearsal room, we’ve lost an actor (thank you, Julie, for your time so far – it was more helpful than you might know!) and we’ve brought in a new Shadow (hey, Crystal!), so along with Michael and Liz (longtime Shadows) our next meet will be this coming Monday. Much has happened for me in the script since we were last together.

I almost think I wrote the arc of the play in 8 pages, and have now suddenly realized this (because these moments weren’t really working well squished inside of 8 pages) and think I know how to make this journey make more sense (in some sense) so it develops more organically. As soon as Michael suggested that a certain repetitive gesture in the script be used to re-transfer one character’s consciousness back to its home actor (this will make sense, hopefully, when you’ve seen the play), this was the moment that steered me differently attempting to build to that moment and now that has opened up entirely new avenues for the play. This is also part of the fun in the writing for me, to have a vague idea and see where that goes on my own and then see what the actors bring to that – major things have happened to texts for me based on ideas found in the rehearsal space.

This is all discovered, for me, in the room with the actors playing with the text I cobble together at home. I’m not sure I can write a play just sitting alone at home, especially if I’m not going to do anything with it – I think this is what makes me NOT a writer (that and this current sentence). I think a writer writes because that’s what writers do. I’ve started a number of plays that never reach an end – it’s like I can’t see it on my own. I want to create and play with interesting theatre, it’s expensive to do that with written plays which can also tie your hands creatively, so we’re stuck playing with my writing for now. I’m trying to produce with the same aims I have in mind in choosing a published play and the staging decisions that entails: I want to make plays that *I* would like and share the experience with others who might like these plays too.

It’s very exciting but also makes me anxious to embrace creating the entire theatrical venture from the ground up, but thanks to the Shadows and their willingness to play we have all the resources we need: Actors! This is also informing the creation of the play, that we want to do this with very minimal production effort and with a focus on and driven by the actors.

Staging Rougher Magic last fall confirmed what I’d hoped was still true: We can do this with that focus on just the actors and it still works beautifully, especially in an intimate set-up – and that’s key too and has become more and more important to me. When I think back to many of my fondest theatrical memories they are from experiences where the usual borders were broken down and a more honest exchange seemed possible with the audience (like the corner of a cafeteria, or stage lights not working and performing just under house lights — the exposure). This new play is being designed for a very small audience and staging, keeping everyone REAL close. Keeps things interesting … it’s a major component to a live event and what we’re doing … we promise nobody will need to dodge flying apple cores this time though …


A STORY JONES Notes – April 9/2015(PM)
In December 2014 it became impossible to stage THE FIRST/LAST PLAY due to a lack of necessary actors, so instead I jumped on using the Shadows still keen to play and began to flush out an idea I’d first written down in May 2013:

That of a man unable to eat, and thus couldn’t celebrate life since food is a kind of ritual/celebration. Since December 2014 I have been trying to develop a play, a story, out of that idea.

I also love this old Grateful Dead song, Black Peter, and always thought its story was dramatic.

A Story Jones - Cast v.1

A Story Jones – Cast v.1

From these two ideas a story has evolved, inspired by my friend and unseen Shadow, Andrew Jones. It’s not a story *about* Andrew, but I know he would dig the adventure and the world we’re creating in this new play. While food is still an important piece of the story, the actual telling of stories — something Andrew was famous for — is more of the focus now. In this world of the play, people need to gather together to hear stories … they require the stories, without which the people are lacking, feeling a need, an unfulfilled desire or craving: a “jones” for stories …

A couple of weeks ago the cast and I began playing with my text in the rehearsal room, prompting me to do more writing at home and thus influencing and spinning the play in different ways — I love doing this!



by Scott Shannon


In rehearsal with the following SHADOWS:

Director – TBD

FIRST LAST NOISE! Notes – Dec/2017

Trying to build a one-man show out of a one-man show that became a multi-part show but has now gravitated back towards a solo piece …


  1. The SJ performance was, in its Tempest way, spell-binding. The actors were all on top of their game, and the play is just so energetic, so frenetic, so chock-a-block with variety. The word that comes to mind for my reaction was “wonder”–and not just “I wonder what the hell is going on,” but being full of wonderment. Thoroughly enjoyable. I hope you get a good, responsive crowd out this Friday.

  2. Thanks for your continued support of our work in SJ, Sandra! Always great to see you out there and we appreciate you spreading the word about the show … and for me the “nerves” issue is not something that overcomes me at the time of performance (knocking on wood right now), but more in contemplation afterwards … “I got up there, and did what? Oh, man … never again!” That feeling has kept me off stage for quite lengthy spells in the past … like years …

  3. Very much looking forward to the production in SJ (I’ll be there on the 28th). I’ve recommended that two of my classes see it. (I’m going to mention your ‘nerves’ issue to my performance class, who are having their own panics at present!)

  4. Rebekah Chasse

    I can’t wait to see The Table Experiments. I love the idea of “from the ground up” creation like this.

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